07/31/2025
It was college application season, and I was working with one of my high school seniors on his personal statement.
As his college counselor, I asked him to skim through the list of essay prompts.
đ âDonât overthink itâjust scroll. If anything sparks a memory, even if it feels random, say it.â
He was quiet for a while.
Then he suddenly laughed.
I asked, âWhat came to mind?â
He said,
âItâs not relevant. I donât think I could use it as an essay.â
I encouraged him to share it anyway.
Thatâs when he said:
âI almost killed my dog walking him.â
(And yesâthat became the actual title of his college essay.)
He explained how his mom would ask him to walk their dog, but tossing a stick got boring fast. So he brought his drone to the park, thinking it might keep the dog entertainedâand give him something fun to do too.
It worked.
The dog loved chasing the drone.
Meanwhile, he became mesmerized by the view from aboveâthe layout of the streets, the movement of people and space, the natural design of the environment around him.
He started losing track of time.
Those short walks turned into long, two-hour runs.
After a few weeks, his mom noticed the dog had lost a significant amount of weight.
She grew worriedâso worried they almost took him to the vet.
Thatâs when he had to confess:
âActually⌠I think heâs just been running too much while I fly the drone.â
At first, he thought the story was silly. Not serious. Not âcollege essay material.â
But the more we talked, the more it revealedâhis fascination with environment, design, and technology. His perspective. His curiosity. His voice.
đ That storyâalong with a strong applicationâhelped him get into UC Berkeley for Environmental Design.
⨠The takeaway?
You donât need to sound impressive.
You just need to be honest. Be you.
đŠ DM me âESSAYâ if you want help discovering your story.