Mary Margaret Freeman, Writer

Mary Margaret Freeman, Writer 20+ years experience editing and coaching academic and general writers. No project is too big or too small. Meticulous work. First consult and sample edit free!

Member, Editorial Freelancers Association. BA. Journalism. University of Georgia. MA. Creative Writing. University of Dallas. ABD. Literature and Theology. Fellowship year. Centre for Medieval Studie. University of Toronto.

I've had the nagging thought for some time that to understand the perils of the current political moment we need to look...
05/24/2025

I've had the nagging thought for some time that to understand the perils of the current political moment we need to look at the powerful neo-pagan tech oligarchs and their agenda: a racist authoritarianism run by CEO sovereigns.
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Timothy Nieberding and Mark Shea pointed out:

OK, just in case you think that the last hundred days are just a blip in the history of the united states. Read this about the philosophy behind DOGE and many of the tech-billionaires who support Trump. We are talking "post democracy", "post capitalism", "post human rights."

Dark Enlightenment

06/21/2023

A client whose Fulbright application I edited
was awarded a Fulbright!

Is the Dictionary Always Right?Back in the day, I taught English grammar to college freshmen, and grammatical thinking h...
05/19/2023

Is the Dictionary Always Right?

Back in the day, I taught English grammar to college freshmen, and grammatical thinking has always informed my editing work.

But there are always disputed usages. Editors often discuss these in professional forums like those on Facebook.

This morning I found a thread about the use of the phrase "overweight and obesity" in a medical article. Being the grammarian I am, I immediately defaulted to the rule of parallelism, which creates stylistically fluent and logical sentences. So, I’d amend the phrase to a parallel construction of noun + noun OR adjective + adjective.

But there's the rub, depending on what part of speech you assign to "overweight.“ I read it as an adjective, not a noun, so I'd go for "overweight and obese."

But others in the thread argued for maintaining the phrase as is.

So I turned to Merriam-Webster, a dictionary of almost canonical status among many US editors. There I found "overweight" listed as a noun, presenting its use as such from a peer-reviewed medical article and other US newspapers of record, such as the NY Times and USAToday.

So I find myself in the weird position of tilting at the windmill of a dictionary, of all things, but that's where I am. NOT all dictionaries get grammar right.

Despite Merriam-Webster's declaration of "overweight" as a noun, I couldn't construct any example of a naturally, orally spoken sentence where "overweight" is used as a noun. A quick Google search shows that this current usage/mis-usage of "overweight" is a matter of discussion among editors.

Next, I went to the Cambridge Dictionary (UK) and found "overweight" listed as an adjective only.

My take is that the misuse of "overweight" as a noun is just that—a misuse that has crept into medical and other writing, and thus now appears in textbooks and peer-reviewed articles.

This isn't a surprise, since the study of grammar in US schools began to decline in the mid-1980's, under the formal encouragement of the National Council of Teachers of English (NCTE), who urged exclusion of grammar instruction in favor of “language arts.”

Non-grammatical usages have proliferated in US English at least. Compare "graduated from high school/college" to "graduated high school/college."

The latter grates on me because it makes "graduated" into something resembling a transitive verb that can take an object, but high school/college isn't a direct object; the phrase is something new that I can't assign grammatical categories to--making it "an idiom"--an “idiom” being a usage that simply “is” and not explainable by ordinary grammatical categories or rules. (English prepositions fall into this category.)

But it's the nature of language to be dynamic for whatever reasons. What's an editor to do? I'd advise my clients of the grammatical issue, urge them to use the grammatically parallel adjective terms--"overweight and obese"-- but put the decision in their hands.

(Image: Dictionary_flickr_quotecatalog.com July 6, 2018)

08/24/2022

FALLACY OF THE DAY: “I’M ENTITLED TO MY OPINION”

It’s true that everyone is entitled to their opinion. However, “I’m entitled to my opinion,” is often used to shield an unsupported position. And being entitled to your opinion doesn’t mean you’re right, or that anyone needs to take your opinion seriously.

There are several problems with this fallacy.

1. An opinion doesn’t mean what they think it means. Opinions are subjective judgements or viewpoints. When someone claims they are “entitled to their opinion,” it’s often because they are trying to shield factually incorrect assertions.

2. All opinions aren’t equal. Expert opinions are interpretations of evidence based on years of study and experience, and are significantly more robust and reliable than non-expert opinions. “I’m entitled to my opinion” suggests that their opinion is just as good as anyone else’s.

3. We should all be open to changing our minds if the evidence suggests we should. “I’m entitled to my opinion” is essentially an admission that they can’t justify their position… but yet they’re unwilling to entertain contradictory evidence or other points of view.

In the face of facts that contradict a belief, especially one central to our identity or values, we use motivated reasoning to reduce the cognitive dissonance that arises when reality and our beliefs are in conflict. When that fails, our Get Out of Jail Free Card is to defend the belief by rendering it unfalsifiable and therefore immune to evidence. We move the goalposts. Discount sources or deny evidence. Proclaim that it’s our opinion.

It’s important to remember that the purpose of arguing isn’t to be right, it’s to get it right. “I’m entitled to my opinion” shuts down any further disagreement and the opportunity to learn. They simply don’t want to be wrong.

HOW TO COUNTER: I tell my students on the first day of class that they are not entitled to their opinions. (At least not in class!) They are only entitled to what they can support with evidence.

It’s a bit trickier in the “real world.” Remember that people are often unfamiliar with the basics of critical thinking, so they may not be used to having to support their positions with evidence. Consider explaining why “I’m entitled to my opinion” is fallacious, and the benefits of healthy disagreement. The best approach is probably to ask them why they hold this particular opinion, and why they think they’re “entitled” to it.

MORE ON THIS AND OTHER FALLACIES: https://thinkingispower.com/logical-fallacies/

Are you beginning a dissertation, thesis, or other advanced research writing project? Keep your hat on with my editing a...
08/23/2022

Are you beginning a dissertation, thesis, or other advanced research writing project? Keep your hat on with my editing and coaching services. I'll make sure you stay on track!

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Midsummer is the ideal time to take a break and imagine where your dreams might take you!     (Bubbles. Stellajo1976 fli...
07/19/2022

Midsummer is the ideal time to take a break and imagine where your dreams might take you!


(Bubbles. Stellajo1976 flickr.com/photos39580703)

07/13/2022

When you need the Oxford comma:

> Among those interviewed were Merle Haggard’s two ex-wives, Kris Kristofferson and Robert Duvall.

> This book is dedicated to my parents, Ayn Rand and God.

> Highlights of Peter Ustinov’s global tour include encounters with Nelson Mandela, an 800-year-old demigod and a d***o collector.

E - Strategies for thoughtful Explanations> Annotate the text to reveal what is significant.> Analyze and evaluate sourc...
07/12/2022

E - Strategies for thoughtful Explanations
> Annotate the text to reveal what is significant.
> Analyze and evaluate sources for relevance and credibility, commenting on their assumptions, neutrality, biases, appeals, and logic.
> Relate this information explicitly to your topic sentences and thesis.

(Examining Clouds. Kate Ter Haar @ flickr.com/photos/katerha)

How to Develop a ParagraphUse "I" - InformationFor research papers• Select short direct quotes or paraphrases from your ...
07/07/2022

How to Develop a Paragraph
Use "I" - Information
For research papers
• Select short direct quotes or paraphrases from your research.
• Incorporate data such as facts, statistics, examples, and expert
opinions.
For informal essays
• Use personal experiences or anecdotes.
• Draw on common knowledge.
• Choose illustrative examples from pop culture.


(Ingredients by Joshua Rappenecker flickr.com/photos/joshua)

P = Point = Topic Sentence = Main Idea• Choose one point or idea you will need to prove in order to  develop your thesis...
07/06/2022

P = Point = Topic Sentence = Main Idea
• Choose one point or idea you will need to prove in order to
develop your thesis.
• Write this point out as a topic sentence.
• Gather the information relevant to that main idea or point and
draft the rest of the paragraph.
• Return to your original point or topic sentence and make any
necessary revisions so that it fits the content of the paragraph.


(Metallic ballpen @ www.planetofsuccess.com/blog

DON'T FORGET TO TURN ON THE LIGHT!The topic sentence is a light that announces the content or subject of the paragraph a...
06/29/2022

DON'T FORGET TO TURN ON THE LIGHT!
The topic sentence is a light that announces the content or subject of the paragraph and its relationship to a thesis, chapter, section or subsection.


(Grand Bazaar Istanbul, Viaggionelmondo.net)

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